Monday, November 24, 2008

Light Years Comment

I liked the idea of the plot but found the writing stiff. Too much third person - so I didn't really relate to the main character. I also thought all the references to UVA unnecessary - for example I didn't need to know that the playing field was sunken because it was used to make the bricks for the Rotunda. Just not necessary - especially if you're not from VA.

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